Feedback of initial idea

In this video, it became apparent that my collegues and teacher felt that i could have gone in more depth about my locations, this way they would have a much better understanding. At first, it  came across as ambiguous through the way i presented it in the slide. There were numerous suggestions about using alternative plots, something that i should have considered at the time and now it's more understandable the point in which the my colleagues made.  The fact that it was just one plot could have made it seem boring and disengaging to the audience members independent of quickly the shots were it was still vital to ensure that the video had some time of stroyline and meaning to it. The positives were that the rest of the presentation was done clearly which in turn meant that the understanding from them all was good.